I need his heart and he needs mine,
He's weak against her and strong against no one,
He wants to know whats harder,
Leaving her or getting with me,
I gave him my heart and he returned it in peices,
I lift my love for him with a broken wing
While the other one stays strong and holds up my independence,
I love him so much that I would traid my wings for him,
I will never learn how to fly unless he fixes my wings
and teaches me to.
Author notes
I dedicate this poem to Luis Acosta,
I still can't beleive I trusted you
A contest entry
- Find Love Again by FallenFrmGrace.
600 points, ended June 1, 2007, 27 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I have bad news... It doesn't get any easier the older you get!!! Sad but true! Just don't compromise yourself respect to be with someone... then fewer losers can slip through the cracks!!!
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WELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i've done that before.puit my trust into someone elses hands and what happens...they betray it for someone else.hurts like a mother f*cker.but luckily i got over it and apparently so did you -
It seems that this guy is a complete ass...but I may be wrong....
Good luck in the future... -
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he is and now I have a new love and he treats me right and he loves me and now "the ass" is trying to win back my heart, but after what he did he'll never win my love back
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Such an adoring, yet heartaching piece.
If tere really is a god, I think It was the devil that created love, what better dischord to through humanity into ruin, no other creature in the world deals with such nonsense as we do over this.
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tanx for the comment and I would like to say that every single word of this poem is true
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I fugured it was, after reading what I have thus far of yours.
And I know what its like to love someone who doesnt feel the same and recognize it in your words.
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