following your steps
the footprints through my mind
you've been walking here all day
just five little months ago
we walked hand in hand
buying christmas chocolates
singing like Ben Crosby
but you won't be home for christmas, will you?
the turn of your mouth
after a witty joke
with a tart twist
sparkling blue eyes
just before a kiss
i can't decide most what i miss
lost in these halls
following my feet into yesterday
following a ghost never leads to the future
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This is about loss isn't it? Very sad, deeply personal, I liked some of the words, some of it was creative and inspired, the emotions you described, very true and very heartfelt.
This is a lovely poem, sad, but very good.
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yes, this is about loss.
Thank you for giving this a read.
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This is quite moving and emotional dragon
with sad imagery... content.
Leaves one feeling sad with the imagery and content you have expressed here.
Well done dragon... keep writing!
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Stephen
how you are well.
take care.
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