Granted that sometimes, this mind does ponder the
very things it has become accustomed to, but
now that I can actually look back, this figure
of a soul can finally acknowledge that life doesn't
have to be materialistic just to survive
In a list
A contest entry
- 5 lines 15 poets # 2 by Kari.
375 points, ended May 24, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Isn't it a great thing when we realize the insignificance of materialism
You've summed this up quite perfectly here 
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This is beautiful... and it's so true... no wonder you won silver... absolutely amazing write here! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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hmmmm, honestly, i think you are right in this poem, i allow wish i could get out of that train of thought sometimes, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Well done and the best of luck to you in the contest!
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