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My Lilac Scented Flower ~* ~* ~*

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Lilacs ususally grow on bushes, but this one grew within my heart ~

Instantly, I felt her warmth, she cradled me from the very start ~

Lost on my journey, learning how to write, taking me by the hand ~

Always watching out for me, though my Poetry was ever so bland ~

Caring is her middle name, an hourglass with never ending sand ~

 

Teaching me about Poetry, her loving patience was ever so nice ~

Helping others is her passion, always perfect, tender and precise ~

Open to any discussion, I would have married her if I was straight ~

Under five hours to sleep, our next conversation would have to wait ~

God gave me a Gift one day, a scent from a marvelous Flower ~

Heaven only knows, I think about her, my Sis, every waking hour ~

This is not a love story, I just want her to know she's my true Love ~

Something wonderful happened, when God sent me his purest Dove ~

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An

 

Acrostic

 

for my Loving Sis,

 

~ Lilac ThOughts ~

 

Brother Bear loves you!

 

*Smooches*

 

 

Gary......

 

 

you better always take care of my Gift from God ~

 

Brother Bear ~

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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    Thank you so much bro...

    OMG Bro I don't know how I missed this beautiful gift, I am in tears, so many tears, they blind my vision of the screen...

    I remember when we met, you entered my contest and we struck up a friendship instantly...and I do remember those days of going through poetry together and I have watched you bloom with beautiful perfect verse flowing from your pen...I felt so much pride and pleasure in our poetic friendship, and still do, you are also deep within my heart bro, never will I let you go... EVER!!

    Thank you for this wonderful Acrostic, and I ask your permission for it to be placed on my authors page when I set it up properly, I would truly love that [sniff] [sniff] oh where is my handkerchief?

    Friends for ever, because you are the golden thread sewn into the colours of my life

    Much love sent your way...x
    ~sis


    • Arkbear gold member
      June 14, 2007
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      Love You Sweety ~

      My Oldest Boy graduates from High School in about 6 hours, so I am off as soon as I thank everyone for their wonderful comments ~

      I can't believe I was Spotlighted today!!!

      I feel so blessed today.....words can not explain ~

      You're my Angel.....always have been....always will be ~

      Love You Claire ~~

      Brother Bear ~


  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 28, 2007

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    congratulations on this honourable winner. very beautiful and well deserving. thank you for sharing your talent with me. viyanna rosemarie


  • getsbetter
    May 27, 2007

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    Your words are absolutely beautiful Bear, and I think their is so many that would have to agree. Thank you for writing this to a wonderful person in this world and our friend...GETS


  • Desire gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    Precious!!

    What an Acrostic Brother Bear and Love the emotions You have brought forth to Touch Spirit
    She is one I call Form Queen also and does the most Beautiful pieces...
    Love this verse and I could copy and paste the parts I adore but I adore the entire package
    Wooooooooooooo hoooooooooooooooo
    Sizzle Sizzle~~
    Oooooooooooooooooooh Love the color too
    Magnificent job on this Gem for a Gem Sweet One!
    Priceless!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings always
    and much love~ Sissy Desire~*~


  • Frozentearz
    May 25, 2007

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    What a wonderful write, I love the contrast of the lilac bush to the beauty of your friend here at A.P.
    For it holds much beauty and thought,
    Very special indeed, from your warm heart.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • ennovy silver member
    May 24, 2007

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    Purity In Friendship

    You have composed one of the prettiest acrostic poems I have read, in a long time. The friendship and love shared between two people is always awesome and amazingly beautiful. Wow! glad you found a Sister/angel like her. Excellent write...........novy


    • Arkbear gold member
      May 24, 2007
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      Novy ~

      Yes....an Angel....that's my Lilac ~

      Thank you for your review my Friend ~

      God bless,

      good night,

      Bear ~~


  • Cherry Hades
    May 24, 2007
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    Aww...This is so heartfelt.
    You are truly talented, Bear.

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