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I Will Hold Back Nothing...

Nothing,
matters to me,
than showing you real love,
where it truly belongs within,
depth of my very heart: inner spirit,
One more thing that I need to say..
you are: sweet lady in black..
I will hold back
Nothing.


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  • Poet-treeman
    March 8, 2008

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    To a great degree what you express here is the true essence of love. But only in doing so can we experience it all-the highs AND the lows. Isn't it grand?


  • Stardust-luvr
    July 24, 2007

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    you have trully outdone yourself with a true spirit of one that is in love. may you be blessed always. xxxxx

  • Time focus on Me
    July 1, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Well expressed full of heart soul and deep emotions with this poem. It was gorgeous write that you have written here. Way to go Bravo with this magnificent poem that is once again alsome. love every word of this poem that you have written way to go

  • Ir.muse
    May 25, 2007

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    Sweet lady in black? wow...so mysterious! lol...who's this lady? Hope not like the lady in the image for I don't like it...lol...
    Wish you the best.

    Shahrzad


  • ennovy silver member
    May 24, 2007

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    Spectacular Read & Tribute to love

    You have not stopped short this time, you let it all out. such strong emotions, and beautiful feelings are just shining through. Excellent write, Thank you for sharing this one; it dynamic!.......novyMa


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 24, 2007

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    Very Captivating

    Your pen is working amazingly. You have said it all
    elegantly, succinctly and poetically. Your presentation stands out too.

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