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Scorching Heat

Heat taking its toll,
temperature at its peak,
sunrays everywhere.

No place to hide for reprieve,
Impact very damaging.

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  • Ir.muse
    May 25, 2007
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    Wonderful piece. You know sometimes here is like what you wrote here...lol...

    Shahrzad


  • ennovy silver member
    May 24, 2007

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    Natural Perfection

    In some very beautiful words, that speak volumes.
    This an amazing write bout this picture..loved it!
    excellent writing, wonderful read....novy Ma


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 24, 2007
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    Awesome

    Short and very sweet. Very descriptive in so few words.