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Bouquet of Flowers.

Bouquet of flowers,
on a dark and scary night,
our love will abide.

Only in moments like this
I love to dream about you.

My sweet dreams of you,
taking me to Nirvana,
nothing now between.

Only love and serenity
enduring till very end.

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  • ennovy silver member
    May 25, 2007

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    Very Intresting Write of Love

    You have done another wonderful piece about love. You have captured a sweet concept of the flowers from my garden; Son! I know she special to you if only in your dreams...smile! excellent write, beautiful read...novy:

  • Ir.muse
    May 25, 2007

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    hi dear afro,

    wow...you're active again in the site with this lovely piece.
    May your sweet dreams come true.

    Shahrzad


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 24, 2007

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    Wow

    Your romantic side is coming through so beautifully in this one. The flowers are a nice touch too.
    I love the flow of it.

  • Time focus on Me
    May 24, 2007

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    Hey

    This is an alsome poem. I enjoyed reading it and it has a great flow and heart soul put into this poem just a lovely poem that shows how much u love someone alsome.
    Bouquet of flowers,
    on a dark and scary night,
    our love will abide.

    Only in moments like this
    I love to dream about you.

    Magnificent words to go with this poem. I love the picture that goes with it too it brings out the beauty in the peom. Keep da ink flowin and way to go. I was havin a bad day but this poem brigthen my day. alsome job lovely poem.