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[ Thoughts have appeared once more ]

Thoughts have appeared once more
Maybe I should let go
As I sit alone at night
Thinking suicide

Cutting has stopped
The blade so sharp
The skin so white
It makes it feel real
It makes me feel alive
But I don't want to hide
The scars, the marks of the blade
All the time

Thinking I have control
I'll be alright
Then thoughts come
Of suicide
And I begin to cry
Thought I had my life
On the path of light
But now I see
It was all just a lie

Author notes

This is somewhat true for my life at the moment...I don't cut now...It's just that I'm starting to feel really bad again...It's like I backtracked a few steps...It'll all be better after I figure out what to do on Tuesday...if you know me and you're reading this then just msg me if you have any questions...

Please help me figure out a title for this one...

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  • allfaith
    May 25, 2007

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    wow

    i love this poem
    my fav part is
    Cutting has stopped
    The blade so sharp
    The skin so white
    It makes it feel real
    It makes me feel alive
    But I don't want to hide
    The scars, the marks of the blade
    All the time


  • figment.
    May 24, 2007
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    this is a reaaalllyy good poem....i love it....its really similar to how i feell....

    love it <3