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picnic

what's so great about it
is that these berries
leave a stain

we can keep a little on our fingers and in the corners of our mouths

i'm so impressed
and i have no where else to be
only here and now

we can keep our eyes and minds open and smiling

there's so much beauty
in the distance
and right here with us

we can keep on breathing it in with our lungs and souls



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  • Jettison
    May 31, 2007
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    i like things that linger.


  • sarajevo
    May 25, 2007
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    this is so cheerful...i kinda need that right now...lots of shit going on in my country...