When with her,
I forget the words to speak how I feel,
When with her she is all I see.
Never before have i felt so weak,
Yet so strong in the same emotion.
When she is gone I feel like something is missing.
Holding her in my arms just feels perfect.
I never want the way she makes me feel to end.
To not have the words to say how I feel.
Unlike any one person has done me before.
She trumps me at every turn and,
Seems to know me better than I know myself.
She amazes me with her breautiful brown eyes.
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Yea i really dont have the words to express how she makes me feel.
Please tell me what you think
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This is so genuinely heartft it has coloured my day with beauty, it is elegant yet not sickly sweet, a real dedication to someone special
thanks
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This is absolutey beautiful William. Love will do that to you. You all look so georgous together. I wish you all the happiness in the world. Great poem
Love ya bud,
Guin
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Awww
I am so happy for you sweetie!!! Congradulations! Maybe someday I will wake up and find mine! She is a very lucky girl! -
AmericanRebel
This is a great poem Eragon. It makes me wish that I had someone that makes me feel like that -
americanrebel
Hey. This is really good. Congratulations bro you did a great job.
Your Friend, Amy
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Wow I really love this poem. I can just imagine every word just pouring out of your heart. This is exactly how I think love should feel. And I so understand the part about 'when she is gone I feel like something is missing'. I'm so happy for you Reb. You of all people deserved happiness from love
<333
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great poem will
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wow...
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