I wrap her in my arms
and feel her gentle heart
causing her no harm
knowing we will never part
Gazing deeply in her eyes
a deep red tint, she starts to blush
her love and care i do spy
a single strand of hair i gently brush
I pull her closer; an embrace
i lay a kiss tenderly on her lip
her eyes close, simply grace
i feel her heartbeat skip
She pulls me closer, and i proceed
lovingly, she kisses back
our love, a flower from a seed
all beauty and grace, a kiss never lacks
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pitured inspired...
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A contest entry
- Kiss And Tell by WarmHeartedGeisha.
550 points, ended May 31, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How do you really feel? by Mainzy.
1500 points, ended August 18, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Wind of Darkness.
370 points, ended September 30, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautifull,
good luck in the contest -
beautifully written! Such a gently embracing poem! Thanks for the entry in the contest and goodluck
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pretty this is a deep sensual write that shows your an amasing poet
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O very beautiful! This is one of the better ones I've read in a while. I like the feeling of this, & it flowed nicely.
I pull her closer; an embrace
i lay a kiss tenderly on her lip
her eyes close, simply grace
i feel her heartbeat skip
This is my fav out of it all. Well done, and good luck in my contest.
P.S. Plz do not respond 2 my comment
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