Skin tight mistakes never let me go
Never let me go
I could beg you for the answers
But what fun would that be?
It only matters to me
My quiet little obsessions
With the girl they call Death
Seemed so fucking harmless
Until I found myself face down in her bed
Oh take my fucking hand
Take my fucking hand and pull me out
Pull me out
Pull me out
Pulling me down
I’m not scared
I’m fucking terrified
I can’t go down this way
My star-crossed obsessions
With death were so fucking harmless
Face down in her bed
Ruining the sanctity of one night stands
Blame everyone but me
Because I’m too fucking pathetic anyway
Face down in her bed
Lying in her bed
Oh, oh, oh, oh
Am I dead?
Not yet.
My quiet little obsessions
With the girl they call Death
Seemed so fucking harmless
Until I was face down in her bed
Ruining the sanctity of one night stands
Silk sheets stained with blood and regret
Erotic centerfold from the beyond the grave
Pulling me down
Pull me out before she pulls me…
Please, just take my fucking hand
Am I dead?
This was all so fucking harmless
Now I’m lying in her bed
My very last one night stand
Why don’t you rest in peace?
Author notes
Lyrics. I...can't explain these. They are based around a story I'm writing.
Option 1 (it is murder it's just in the person that is being murdered's point of view...just so ya know )
Call me b|e|a|u|t|i|f|u|ll; I need to hear that pretty l*i*e
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I liked the way this write was almost a song, or it rang to me like a song with the repetition and separation of stanzas. I liked this, it was simple but effective.
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Interesting. I felt all of the emotion in this and it's deep. I also liked the imagery this brings to mind. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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