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The Persistent Rest


I.

It is here in the wood
that I find my eternity.

It is here that I write my silence
in the vignette
of a

falling leaf.




II.

A friendship of blackened silhouettes
from length to length,
from root to sky-tip,
stretched,
in angled attempts to find a
parallel with the Universe.

Beyond burns an off-white glisten,
which brims the edges of the wood.
Seeps
into bark crevice and
mossy nook.

A community of darkened faces turns away from its glare.
A whispering and
reverence.
A grace of ebb and flow
in nurtured ways
of all and naught.

The Earth-ed palm
stretches upward its rigor mortis finger-trees and scratches.

Holes in the air.




III.

Aged timeliness stands still.


The Persistent Rest
exists
in the hush of decaying bloom.









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  • theprodigalsister
    May 24, 2007

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    How I have missed your words Jen The visuals are always stunning & now you've captured my attention with 3 parts... Bravo my dear!! Another prize winner


  • Kendall Campbell
    May 24, 2007

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    I read this in two sections, and felt the last seven lines could be the opening; a I - II kind of thing. At first I thought they weren't needed at all but they're good so it'd be a shame to get rid of them completely.

    I liked the use of grammar and punctuation, everything read very deliberately. "exists in the hush of decaying bloom." were particularly beautiful lines.