Always near to where I lay
Always close yet so far away
Without any life it walks to me
No one can feel it, no one can see
Slipping away like water through fingers
No matter how far it lingers
Nothing is forever, nothing at all
You built up a wall, only to have it fall
Never far from the scythe's silver gleam
Prowling through darkness, or so it may seem
A contest entry
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"Nothing is forever, nothing at all
You built up a wall, only to have it fall
Never far from the scythe's silver gleam
Prowling through darkness, or so it may seem" is my favorite part good luck -
beautiful! The flow in this poem is perfect, like silk! You should be proud of this poem! Great job! Great write! Good Luck!
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thank you. i didnt think it was that good but okay.lol.
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wow this is a really deep poem
i really like it!very deep and i can hear your voice in this,well a voice!lol and thats good enough for me
great job though its really good
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lol. thanks for the support. i did this for a project in school but i actually liked it(unlike most of my poetry.lol).
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