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Living on the Edge

I live on the edge
With every thing
That I do.

I am a running
For the government
For some silly thing.

I live off
The grid,
There but not there.

Any miss step,
And I will be
Found out.

So I always
Live on the
Edge.

I love to surf
Out on the blue
Waters.

The best times
Is when a storm
Cause big waves.

One miss step
Can lead to
A crushing death.

I love
Living on the
Edge.

It is fun
To do
Rock climbing.

Just hanging there
With out any support,
Alone hundreds of feet up.

One miss grip
Will result
In a deadly fall.

Feels great to be
Living on the
Edge.

I have to go,
To keep one step
Ahead of the government.

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  • Morrigan Trinity
    May 27, 2007

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    I like this poem. I feel the same way. If life gets too boring I feel I could die. Good luck and thanks for entering.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    May 25, 2007
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    This is great. I love it