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Scared

So what if I’m scared? I’m just a kid.
I have my rights just like you did.
I listen to music to pass the time,
I throw words together that often rhyme,
And I get lonely and worry at night
That I’ll never be simple nor be alright.
So what if I’m scared? Things aren’t like they used to be…

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I know it isn't perfect or eloquent, but that wasn't my goal. I just wanted to find some common ground.

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  • Lj-
    May 25, 2007
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    Hmmm... very easy to relate to. I like how the words are just like thoughts.

    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck!


  • Florida Sunshine
    May 25, 2007

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    aaaaaaaaaaaaah

    I'm OLDDDDDDDDDDDDDD~~~~ and I STILL Get scared!!!!!!!!!! We all do!!! GREAT job on your poem ~ I totally think you did Fantastic...