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Reflection Of Thoughts

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I close my eyes let music play

as on this bed of down I lay.

 

Melodies transport my mind

to distant shores where peace I find.

 

Gentle kissing of the shore

by azure waves for evermore.

 

Palms in tropical breezes sway

night air filled with sweet bouquet.

 

Feathered friend sings a distant tune

illuminated by a silvered moon.

 

Shooting star in heavenly skies

vibrant trail, flares and dies.

 

Softest sands beneath my feet

warm to touch, my joy complete.

 

To escape from all lifes drama

soul at peace, senses calmer.

 

Clear your mind, come with me

Reflection of Thoughts that you can see.

 

 

 

 

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  • arafura gold member
    May 27, 2007
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    well done!

    Calm and soothing... well written and lovely use of imagery.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 27, 2007

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    I am going with you! lol
    Wonderful work here! I love the imagery
    and emotions in this. I think you did a
    great job with this one. A pleasure to read
    and I hope to read more from you soon!
    Take care my friend and thanks for sharing
    this.



    Jeremy0826


  • all the last words
    May 26, 2007

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    This realxed me just by reading it. It had a great flow and very vibrant images brought forth from you lovely words.

  • Napoet
    May 26, 2007

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    Take me there!!

    Great write Sue!! It transported me to a calm place of gentle trade winds and gently crashing waves with an orchestra of natures best laying down the beat! Awesome.


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 26, 2007
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    lovely

    Such a beautifully written piece...
    Tranquil and lovely!
    TY for entering !

    Lynda


  • Musimwa
    May 25, 2007

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    Great

    Mum, such a piece is great. When u recited it to me, lol, i tasted its greatness. It is a wonderful reflection, great work of imagination. Keep this dear one. I love it. Good nite, Son


  • erininthesky
    May 25, 2007

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    I agree with the comment below me... this is really touching.... and the image that goes with it is great too!


  • ibsons hysops
    May 25, 2007

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    finally, Poetry that has really captured my heart and all of my deepest senses as well as my soul to boot!!! I have gotta say, thiws is as awsome for me as it gets when it comes to reading other poets poetry!!! Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!

  • InBetweenThoughts
    May 25, 2007

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    Good morning Sue Well this paints such a beautiful picture in my mind...so warm and very romantic! I enjoyed every line and especially the rhyming and the flow...ever at peace. Good luck with this wonderful entry, Have a beautiful day, Ken IBT


  • Griswold
    May 24, 2007

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    Excellent!!!

    Sue, very well done, I loved it, the rhymes were perfect. It was a very soothing poem. Good job...Scott


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 24, 2007
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    VERY SOFT AND BEAUTIFUL!

    Ths is one beautiful journey you have taken us on with you.


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    May 24, 2007
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    I really enjoyed reading this. It gives off a very calm effect.

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