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My school.

They all tease,
They really dont care about
How your feeling or who you are.
They sit, and laugh...
Make you feel so fukn' small...
Make you feel like nothing at all.
They sit and wait...
For anothe move,
To push you and tease you,
But to them you have to prove
That your not afraid,
You can stand up...

You are you..
Just dont give up.

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  • Shenanigans
    November 10, 2007

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    I liked this one a lot, especially the line "make you feel so fukn' small." Also, I liked the way the last two lines changed from down to hopeful/encouraging. Very powerful. Good job!