Society is a forever burning fire that we are thrown into, naked and unprotected, and expected to survive.
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Powerful sentence about society. I liked it a lot.
Pozo
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VERY CLEVER I MUST SAY! There is a powerful truth that is exposed here that we cannot escape no matter how hard wer try to..there is are veils draped in our society..but are they for real..I leave it our thoughts! Inspiring..I really like it!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Wow
lol...I don't see the Motto portion of this piece although it is indeed quite elegant. In my opinion and perhaps I should have refreshed myself with Webster
before I started trying to comment on these entries,it would have been a good idea to solidify my personal position, anyway-I don't get the connection at this time. But thanks for entering and perhaps your motto is tucked away inside of this write somewhere, I just
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Wow. What a powerful one-liner. I have to say I'm really impressed by this one.
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This is very true I like your philosophical way of thinking. This is a very real sentence and you obviously have given it a lot of thought.
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an great line.
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hmmm one like that is honest and has a sense of conviction in it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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nice line
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So very cynical, but so very true. Sometimes it all seems like too much, but giving up would mean admitting that we're unable to survive. Really makes you think, this does. Best of luck to you!
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Sometimes we're thrown in after being doused in gasoline. lol Cool line.
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