Just because your muggleborn deosn't mean a thing!
If you are determined to be the best you can be
you will go far just you wait and see.
Ron and Harry first thought I was a "know-it-all" now we are the best friends.
For ever until the end.
Rules and schoolwork are important to me as every one can see.
Sometimes rules must be broken in order to be free...
Buckbeak and Sirius would be dead without the help from three.
Me, I have to deal with a bemused mom and dad momentarily.
They are so proud of me.
Yet they know not the dangers that await this trio of three.
Which includes me.
They know not of the hypocrisy placed on me...
By the other students at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Harry and Ron do tend to depend on me for academic help which everyone sees.
My knowledge, and common sense proves a most valuable thing in overcoming the challenges that this trio ends up facing.
No I am not complaining I was just saying.
I am brave, loyal, and compassionate.
And I have a bit of a temperment.
I have a fierce political conscience, and a lot of wit.
So if you think you can take me on you might want to think again.
I am not just some kid.
Yes I am a bit inscure and I fear failure.
Yet I don't let any one see for I portray a false confidence, and I try to be the best at everything in school.
Which is probally why the other kids tend to make me cry.
I have moral superiority which I think everyone needs.
Wingardium Leviosa, Summoning Charm, Polyjuice Potion, and Body-binding curse that does no harm.
Are just a few things that I have mastered without too much disaster.
I wonder if you could learn them faster than me.
That is some thing I would like to see.
So I challenge thee!
A contest entry
- Harry Potter by Corinthians13-4.
430 points, ended June 9, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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that was cute and sound like hermoine all the way!!!!
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Okay, as far as the message, that's basically the story of Hermione's life. The rhythm (and I'm not trying to be overly critical, mind you, this is just a suggestion) could use a bit of work. Poem's typically look (even if they don't sound) better when the lines are shorter, even if that means there are more of them. Then, you can see the rhythm and rhyme sceme better.
Don't let this put you down, though, you've got talent. It's just a little constructive criticism. Good luck.



