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Trapped behind a mask, only love's hands will lift the disguise.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 28, 2007

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    As always you did a wonderful job penning this. I often wonder how that brilliant mind works LOL Great one and best of luck in the contest.

  • tara wilson gold member
    May 25, 2007
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    So true, and wonderfully said


  • intanglio2ring
    May 24, 2007

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    Don't pull the mask off the Ol'Long Ranger and you don't mess around with penman!

    Very deep!
    It's true we are all hiding behind our real mask - and so few we actually allow in!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


    • penman gold member
      May 24, 2007
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      Awww, thanks Tang. Only problem is they don't try to take off my mask, they just take away my glasses! Gets the job done just as well.


  • electric supernova
    May 24, 2007

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    Love it. Sometimes all it takes is a single person to help us change ourselves. You're very talented.


    • penman gold member
      May 24, 2007
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      Thank you for the great comment. Very true sometimes a single person makes the difference.


  • Demon God
    May 24, 2007
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    Or even the lips of flame to remove it entirely...blah, sorry. lol Nice thing.


  • purpledragonfly
    May 24, 2007
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    wonderful !!! Betsy


    • penman gold member
      May 24, 2007
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      Thank you very much for the kind comment.


  • going nowhere
    May 24, 2007
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    PERFECT!!! Love it! You are such an awesome writer.


    • penman gold member
      May 24, 2007
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      Thank you. You're always so kind in your comments.

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