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White Roses

You will find me here
Beneath the white roses,
I'll wait for you here
As daylight softly closes.

The familiar scent
Envelops my senses,
I melt as it slowly
Breaks down my defenses.

Tears in the moonlight
Yet I cry from joy,
As I drown in the love
Even our loss can't destroy.

A trail of white roses
Sent from my Angel above,
A symbol of hope
And our undying love.

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For you Sunshine! xx

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  • Sherlock-Holmes
    June 4, 2007

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    Ooooh.. the imagery is amazing on this one. Very sweet and endearing.. it paints such a lovely and soft picture.. Good work.


  • mentalseductionz
    June 3, 2007
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    FANtastiC piece


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    May 27, 2007
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    this was a cute write.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 26, 2007

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    Darlin,

    This is absolutely gorgeous; so sweet and beautiful

    Stay safe
    Much love to you all
    ~Manda


  • Candy6
    May 25, 2007
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    a beautiful poem and the background


  • wideeyed
    May 24, 2007
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    Well thought out. Nothing forced or forgot. Very well done.


    • Broken - Doll silver member
      May 24, 2007
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      Thanks so much for the comment! Im glad you enjoyed the piece, it is written for someone very special indeed!


  • faded dreams
    May 24, 2007

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    Again so sweet. This makes me think of my "angel above". I love this it's touching in a way I haven't seen in a while. Keep up this inspiring writing!


    • Broken - Doll silver member
      May 24, 2007
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      Again, thankyou for the wonderful comment! when something touches your heart, its easy to find inspiration, and the lady who inspired these two pieces is certainly a special person!


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    May 24, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem!!! I know how much she loves it and how much meaning it has for her, and I can't thank you enough for writing it! It's a beautiful piece of work, beautiful!


    • Broken - Doll silver member
      May 24, 2007
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      knowing she loves it is more than enough thanks. she is such a special person, so full of love and courage. thank you for the lovely comment! xx


  • StarEyes
    May 24, 2007

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    Honey this is beautiful!!!!!! Those white roses, and heaven sent, with a love that will never die!!! You can know what this means to me! And as I sit by those white rose bushes, my thoughts will forever be captured by one that holds my heart gently in his hands for the rest of time! I truly adore this piece!!!!

    May I copy this and add it to the collection of poems that I have of his?

    I love this honey! Thank You soooooo much!!!!!!!!!!



    those tears are of pure love and joy, as this is soooo beautiful!!!!! Thank you again! (these are red, but oh well)


    • Broken - Doll silver member
      May 24, 2007
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      This poem is for you, so please copy and do with it what you wish. This is for you and your Angel.

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