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Shabangabang

I wonder how long semi colons can prolong this sentence; when a tree falls in the hundred acre wood, will pooh, preoccupied by his killing spree hear it when no one else was around; i love pancakes and anything pan cakkity; sports aren't very fun; hooray for allpoetry, where else could I blather on incesently; have i gone too far, if so except my appologies.

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  • Memoirs of a Girl
    May 28, 2007

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    Did you know...

    that in order to use a semi-colon, the next part of the sentence has to refer to the part before it?


  • electric supernova
    May 24, 2007

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    Oh my! I'd wager a bet that you were slightly bored, yes? I was thinking of having a stream-of-consciousness contest sometime soon, I'd definitely like to see you enter that one.


  • Demon God
    May 24, 2007

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    If I could or, if I even should would I prelude to correct any flukes I'd choose not to...there's no point as this is not as much a poem as bored lost train of thought typed up. It's ok, though.