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Peliades



Tantalizing  cluster
prominent in the sky

transcends constellations
celestial, oh so high

hemispheric wonder
a nebula supreme

crowning suns of heaven
nature's glorious theme.



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  • passim silver member
    May 24, 2007

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    Hello Katie, I have been waiting for your poems. Glad I kept looking, I wouldn't have wanted to miss this one, it's so lovely. Well done.


  • Sunshine Always
    May 24, 2007

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    Welcome back my dear friend and what a beautiful write to bring back with you. The imagery is as always a joy to extract from your poems and so rewarding to read. Excellent background that compliments thewhole thing...Missed you lady,,,hugs mal