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lv...I Love

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I love to walk with you

I love to hold your hand

I love the foot im-prints

As we walk in the sand

 

I love your smiling face

As you turn to look at me

I wonder what you're thinking

What you really see

 

I love the way you laugh

At the silly things I say

I just want to hug you

As we walk along the way

 

I love when you close your eyes

The feeling is sheer bliss

I love the tingling feel I get

When our lips meet to kiss

 

 

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  • heygoo
    May 24, 2007

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    This is delicate and so sweet. Expertly complements the feeling of the photo. Romantic walks along the beach, such a treat.

  • Eots
    May 24, 2007

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    once again, the girl that posted before me is reallllllly Hott!!!!!! lol.... It did flow well, almost sounded like a song... good job...


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    May 24, 2007

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    I love the rhyme you used. It flows very well. And I know this exact feeling. awesome, keep writing!

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