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Their Song.

His heart's bassline leaves you
Speechless and longing to
Linger in the chorus
Of your matched breathing
With your head on
His chest, fingers interlaced.

The words strike like lightning
Sending electric currents
From head to toe and verses
Roll like thunder off
Your tongue, roaring
Crescendos in your ears.

He's serenading your senses,
Crank up the volume, turn
Down the lights; just listen.
This summoning of
Something greater from
Within is simply melodic.

Sweeping undertones of the
Oncoming harmonies enchanting.
His eyes pull you front
And center.  His solo is
Finished.  Until the end
Of forever, it shall be
A duet.

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  • Tomorrows Window
    June 2, 2007
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    very nice. i love your word choice an imagery.

  • Jeneralix
    May 28, 2007

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    This is soo cute and sweet. I love the way you put in musical tools within each stanza. Great write! I loved it! Good luck in the contest!
    <3 Jenerali

  • The Void
    May 26, 2007

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    very vivid imagrey,It was so sweet and filled with love. this was a great poem. thanks for entering and good luck

  • Whimsical Fae
    May 24, 2007
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    woot-tastic!

    Love it. You rool. Yes, I went there with the misspelling.

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