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Our time

I'm not perfect and I never will be

no matter how hard I tried

I knew I'd never be want people to see

so instead I settled being an outcast

I stayed in my own little group

knowing no one cared

'cause they thought my friends and I were weird

 

Then I meet you and I fell in love

you made me realize I wasn't just another no one

you proved someone could actually care

and that someone was willing to be there

you showed me there were points to life

and soon you became one of mine

 

One day several months later

you had me listen to a song

I didn't know what you were doing

so I desided to play along

I felt you kneel behind me as the song came to an end

as I turned with tear fill eyes

you slipped the ring on my hand

you asked me that question

and all I could say was yes

 

Slowly one day I told you all my fears

and of all the things I'm deathly scared

Now I'm learning it's it's pointless to fear

For when you fear nothing,

you have nothing to lose

Now my only fear is losing you....

 

Your so far away

and I wish I could see you every day

but as of right now

I'll just have to be happy with our time,

Author notes

It's amazing how things like this can happen and then one thing make all those special feelings go away... This was wrote about my ex-fiance...

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  • cj-renee
    September 7, 2007
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    it's sad, bein' away from the one you love. a round of applause is needed here.


  • jinsays gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    Lovely

    This is very sweet and kind of sad. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Those are things I want to do now that I am single. And free. Amen.


  • TwistedVampire666
    July 24, 2007

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    aw,said but sweet,i bet john misses u 2,i know what it is like to love some one so far away,keep holdin on.great write.


  • EMOtionalDARKness17
    May 24, 2007

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    AHHHHHH!!!!!

    really sweet and i do to am glad that you found happyness with some one and i cant wait till i can find someone too.....i hope that you are truly happy and that he treats you rite......you are a wonderful writter and probly a wonderful person......good write


  • cj-renee
    May 24, 2007

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    It seems to me that everyone goes through these feelings but they're never the same. A few times I thought I found the one that would lovwe me for me and never get tired of me. I'm glad you have and I can't wait 'til I do. Wonderful write.


  • broken-colours
    May 24, 2007

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    Adorable! I've known what it feels like to feel all alone and know that people find you strange or unusual. But you always seem to find that one person that loves every bit of you. (I've found him.) Brilliant poem.


    • Kristin Melissa
      May 24, 2007
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      Thank you for you comment and I am happy that you found someone as well... My guy is in the navy though so I can't always see him

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