Symphony in scarlet
Staining the horizon.
Spectacular display
Showing through nature's glow.
Spectrums of bright aura
Surrounding all I see.
Skies majestic and deep.
Author notes
I thought I would have a go, as it seemed like an interesting form to try!
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition VI by ShelleyA.
525 points, ended June 5, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i liked it the first time i read it...then went back to see the form and it made it that much more amazing. it captures a sunset and gives forth a form that a such an activity truly deserves. good work
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what a colourful poem
loved it, I've just been learning how to do this form
myself. Great imagery
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Thanks! this was my first one of this form. it was a lot of fun to do!
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Congratulations on your silver trophy!
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Awww, thanks! I really liked writing this one.
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Nice title. Good write. Perfect form. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Good word choice. Nice alliteration and assonance. Your poem suits the picture for which it was written. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Very vivid and down to earth
"Skies majestic and deep"
Yeah.....
I seem to be lost in my own little world, my perfectly serene horizon, with skies majestic and deep
Keep them comin!
Much Love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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another nice write, keep up the great work.
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Beautiful imagery that defines a wondrous moment in Nature, complements the picture and flows so gently, lovely piece. Good Luck in the contest!
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The imagery was fantastic!
In line 6, you suddenly went into first person perspective, which didn't quite seem to go with the rest of the poem...but it was a great write nonetheless.
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OK, it is official! You have just written one that says more to me than you will ever know!!!!! This is great!!! I love it!!!!!! Best of luck in the contest!!!
Love ya hon.
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Great job... YOu have a good vocabulary, and I applaud your ability to put it to use in your poetry... No sp errors, and flowed well... Kudos.
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