"So you know,
the internet add ten pounds."
[& pretends I'm pretty,
from articulate angles.]
Promised,
that you'll do the same-
cyber site of lies,
where:
pictures play a thousand words,
But pixels plea out
an audible silence.
A contest entry
- Title Creativity 2 by Celticmoon.
525 points, ended June 4, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short sweet and to the point I do believe. Your words bring up and talk of things that some never realize but is all so true. It is on the net that digital responses ensue with lies to cover the truths viewed by pictures played in silence. Thanks for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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wonderful write. i think you applied your thoughts very well here to the title given and you know, seems like this problem is all too true too. people on the iternet can be whoever they want to be, especially fake and you don't even realize it. excuse me but it is just my opinion as i too have fallen prey to people online. most people i have met have been wonderul but there are a few wolves wandering around
ok, sorry about the rambling. i think your poem is great though. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Interesting
It's interesting, but what, exactly, is the point of this poem? What's the meaning behind it? Because, whether by my fault or yours, I'm not really finding one. -
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The meaning is, you can never really know internet aquaintances.
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oooohhhhh, that makes sense
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