You come.
You go.
You're a loving heart.
You're a bitter foe.
I never knew what it meant,
Because it was never clear.
That my insecurity,
Would have us succumb to fear.
You cut because you're addicted,
You don't because you love me,
I joined because I'm weak,
You cared because you killed me.
So why not end my sorrow,
Ease my pain.
Cast me into the darkness
And burn it away again.
I'll learn to accept the pain,
Of these lacerations on my heart.
My blood will rain from the sky,
When you take my life in the dark.
Built up thoughts of a year of madness =D
Comments
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Wow.... Very powerful though slightly emo. lols. I like it alot. Much much more developed than your earlier poetry, probably cause of all the emotion packed into it.
Excellante!
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I am not entirely sure why, but the line "you cared because you killed me" hit me harder than all the other ones (though there are other very good lines...). I liked this.
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Wow, this was intense and strong and very "feeling" provoking even to someone who doesn't cut. Thank you for sharing it.
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this is a cool poem and sad of course but i liked it... you should check my poem out!
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