my sin is your skin,
riddled with perfection.
every pore drawing me in.
my sin is your breath,
warm on my lips,
the smell of alcohol forcing me to inhale.
my sin is your secret,
our secret that everyone knows.
my sin is you, your sin is me.
get lost in your eyes,
and find solace in probable
heartache from
false words.
but my sin is you,
and you are a
dream come true.
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this is the story of our forbidden love affair.
Please tell me what you think
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wow that describes just how much you can want something, loved it.
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AMAZING
I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!! MY FAVORITE PART IS THE LAST STANZA;
BUT MY SIN IS YOU
AND YOU ARE A
DREAM COME TRUE!
I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS!!!
GREAT WORK -
Its simple, Its nice, and the flow is quite amazing. I will admit, that it is different from what I do, but isnt that what is amazing about this place?? To be able to see different things?? Who knows.
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Wonderful writing
I really liked this piece of writing. It is deep. It flows really well too. A very powerful piece with simplistic words. Wonderful writing.
Wayne
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liked it
my sin is your skin,
riddled with perfection.
you started it right. i like those lines. awesome job, great flow, simple yet not simplistic.
keep it up,
~marcus
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I know a lot about forbidden love affairs... especially illegal ones. O___o Haha...
I really like this poem, a lot. It's one of my favorites, and I've decided to add you to MY favorites. <3
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thank you.
it means alot that you took the time to read my poetry.
x
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