The heart which is inspired,
The love which is burning,
The mind which is ever fresh,
It is you! it is in you!
Never say goodbye,
Because where to go?
You are only everywhere,
Can you leave you?
If there is anybody in this world
Who can love you,
It is only in yourself
The Omnipresent in you.
Let all hearts melt,
Fuse into one,
All of us, thus, will leave together
So that nobody loses none.
This is what I like to give you
My sister wherever you are
To light the light of love and bliss
Because I, that great I, only exist everywhere.
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A contest entry
- BLESSINGS AND LOVING THOUGHTS # 11 : ~ POETRYINTHEBLOOD ~ by maa.
543 points, ended May 29, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TRANSFORM YOUR GREEN TROPHIES AND HEAL MY HEARTACHE by maa.
521 points, ended August 21, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - whatever you want by Anonymous Shadow.
600 points, ended October 1, 2007, 119 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Refuge of Poetry in Times of Great Sorrow by FunnelWaxFate.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent, thought-provoking piece! Definitely threw me into a deep brood. Very profound and inspirational!!! The lines that I loved the most were, “ If there is anybody in this world
Who can love you,
It is only in yourself
The Omnipresent in you.”
What I felt from those lines was a concept of the instillation of inner spirituality, peace, grace, divinity-the omnipresent that lives in each heart, each essence, of all individuals. I loved that final line, too, “Because I, that great I, only exist everywhere.” I felt deep reality here, how, though we have greatness within ourselves, there is still a concept of altered form, and the part where it accentuates, “that great I” made me think of this. Very deep write, the beauty of its message is both profound and inspirational, very insightful write! Excellent write! -
excellent write good luck in my contest
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Let all hearts melt,
Fuse into one,
All of us, thus, will leave together
So that nobody loses none
this part seemed a bit forced but that very well may just be my ignorant ears talking. I never claimed to be an expert. Well written and thanks for entering. -
Wonderful
Such beautiful work, well done and good luck!
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I do remember this poem very, very well ... and it still gives me shivers ... your lucid and loving words of encouragement still resonate within me ... I usually only give out hms if I really, really like a poem ... so each one of the poems entered here are a blessing to my heart ... thank you for giving me a second chance of honoring your gift ...
maa -
Divine
'It is only in yourself The Omnipresent in you. '-you have put it all so well in a perfect nutshell-you have surmised the very doctrine of life and ever so well-'Because I, that great I, only exist everywhere'-another very powerful line-A most soothing read gracias senor Sandip
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very loving
good fucus on worldly love and togetherness, the only thing that will keep the planet in peace
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To Turtle74
Thank you for lovely comments.
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indeed, where can she go ?
she would always be NOWHERE ... NOW HERE ...
your words are filled with wisdom, presence and healing ... healing of the belief of separation, the only one that makes us suffer so much ...
may your words touch the deepest core in josephine, so she will once again remember her greatness, beauty and oneness ...
thank you, blessed soul, for your most inspiring offering ...
maa
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