I love you with all my heart
can't you see
My heart had a crash when we spoke
I don't know how to fix what you broke
You treated me fine
and then it all died
We were never together
but forever you'll be in my mind
I love you
can't you see?
I want you, need you
but you just don't agree
Will I ever get you?
Tell you again how I truely feel?
Or will it be like the last time
we spoke and you broke me
I love you, I really do
but I guess you don't see this because now your gone
You've left and I'm alone
for two more years before I leave too
You were the older one
I was the sister's friend
Not until last year did I see
what I really felt just fo you
Then you shot me down
you stepped on my heart and smashed it into the ground
I love you
I want you
Hold me
Love me
Forever you'll
not be forgotten
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- Show Me The Love by The Void.
455 points, ended May 26, 2007, 24 entries
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Thank you very much!
I hope you have a wonderful summer, next Thursday I am off to New York for a month. I'll try and get on AP as much as I can.
Love,
mem -
It is NOT about breaks up.
It is aboyut someone who I thought I loved (maybe I still do...) and he did not return it. I never went out with him
Mem -
this was a really nice poem, but my contest does not allow poems about break ups , please read the contest page. thanks for entering anyway
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Thank you so much! Yea I've really loved this guy since last year April and I've known him for ten years. I'll miss him since he graduated yester (Weds. May 23rd, 2007)
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perfect
this sounds almost like one of the ones i wrote about a while ago about someone i loved very much... i was with him for 2 1/2 years and he broke up with me for some chick... but ya this reminds me of him
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