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Addict

The harder it is,
the more I take in.
The more I take in,
the easier it becomes.
The easier it is,
the harder it becomes.
The harder it is,
the more I take in.
The more I take in,
the easier it becomes.
The easier it is,
the harder it becomes.
The harder it is,
the more I take in.
The more I take in,
the easier it becomes.
The easier it is,
the harder it becomes.
The harder it is,
the more I take in.
The more I take in,
the easier it becomes.
The easier it is,
the harder it becomes.
The harder it is,
the more I take in....

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love happens once in a lifetime. the difference lies in how many time you're willing to live in the time that you're alive.

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  • ChynaBlack
    December 13, 2007

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    I love this poem it really makes you feel the intensity it almost makes you spin and you can understand the cycle of the addict

  • Electric Sunrise Moderators member
    December 7, 2007
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    Hey there, firstly allow me to apologise for the late judgement of this contest, this is an interesting piece, its simple, yet effective in the repititive technique it employs, and speaks for life in a sense too. Well Done and best of luck in the contest