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"if only!"

If only
there were more
hours in a day

if only
i had more time
to stay

if only
happiness 
was there your
hold life time

if only
heartaches never
came anytime

if only
i was not in love
with you

if only
your love for
me was true

if only
love and caring
was in all hearts

if only
i could go back
and life re-start!

Author notes

I was in the bed for the night and these words came into my head.... I had to get up and put them to print!

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  • KainLegin
    May 28, 2007

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    Goodness, this was great, it plays rytham with the heart. lol it's diffenetly one of my favorite poems ever.


  • vici377
    May 27, 2007

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    great summation

    i know exactly how you feel, i am the same way words will start in my head and they just have to come out... thank god for people like you who take the time to share your gift... great poetry should be shared... thanx again


  • MahoganyFlow
    May 25, 2007
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    Wonderful flow!! I've spent many nights feeling the same way . This was very well written and you are a very fine poet yourself!!


  • shuvi
    May 25, 2007

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    AWESOME

    very well-written,.. everyone can so relate to it.. very good and very true.. ur words were beautiful and touching, and i liked the way u wrote it, the format was exceptional.. thanks for sharing, keep the pen rolling, lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi


  • meoncloud9
    May 24, 2007

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    Inspirational!!

    Very inspiring!! Something very very true. Sometimes all that we are left after everything happens is repentance. This write brings it out very well.
    The part that I liked the most was,
    'if only
    i could go back
    and life re-start!'
    Great write.

  • OurxBeginning
    May 24, 2007

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    This is a very good write. Deep and I'm sure that many people can relate. Thank you for sharing and keep it up.


  • Janice M Pickett
    May 24, 2007

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    Guessbwhat! you can

    We can restart our lives just by looking at everything we have done so far, in a different light. Turn every action and every deed into something positive that you know about now. Thispoem is flowing and sweet. I like your approach of the style and that you got up in the night to write it. LOL WELL DONE.
    hugs
    Jan


  • VirginiaDarling
    May 24, 2007
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    Very good write. I like it. Very good rhyming an thoughts.

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