Im Winter,
Die Tochter von Herbst,
Die Mutter von Frühling,
Wenn alles kalt ist,
Die Maus versteckt sich in ihrem Haus,
Kommen die Schneehasen heraus zu spielen,
Und alles macht Spaß, bis die Sonne fällt.
Roughly translated:
In Winter,
The daughter of Autumn,
The mother of Spring,
When all is cold,
The mouse hides in her house,
The snow hares come out to play,
An all is fun, untill the sun falls.
(It makes more sense in German methinks)
Author notes
I'm not the greatest at German so if I made a mistake I am sorry! This is also my first German poem so it's not great heehee.
Please tell me what you think
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La! I hadnt comented on this one yet. I dont think it makes much sense either way, but it does sound better in german! Good job on the translation.
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I LOVE IT!!! although i live in the u.s i love german!! Im taking it in school right now so i understood everything and as far as im concerened no german was wrong. Its a very relaxing piece i believe and i love the last line. good job!!
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Thanks!
I am taking German as well, it's a great language! Thanks for the comment.
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Very nice keep it up
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The English version is good, Sometime a write in an other language loses it meaning when you translate it to English. But it’s good to try new things. Keep penning my friend. (Lisa)
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Thank you my friend!
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Well... ummmmmm... this is hard for me to comment on because I don't know ANY german... so if you could put an english traslation more people would understand. Rock oN! xoxo Meg
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Whoops... there all taken care of!
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