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ode to my friend

shes smart as a calculater,my friend who loved to run, whos hair is black as cole, my fiend who i miss, who moved from L.A ,who felt alone, who brougth you up when you were down, who made a joke when you were blue, my friend  who loves music and plays too, who  im miss, Whose goodbyes brought tears to my eyes, who i wish would understand,my friend who....i miss, who i will never forget,my friend who i miss, WHO I WILL NEVER FORGET........who made friends here and their, who is not like me.........

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True story when i left for my knew school

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  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    May 23, 2007

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    This could be excellent with spellcheck, grammar and typos. I mean it, as I have been writing since way back.

    If you'd like a good critique, and I mean a smacking good Level 2 (See my author's page for details by clicking my name) please let me know. I will gladly
    give you an honest one.

    Thank you for sharing this really 'edgy' piece
    of journaling.
    Warmly I welcome you...CookieZeal