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Heat Wave

Heat intense,
It slaps against my skin
Leaving angry red burns behind
That pain me for days
on end.

I feel faint
From the exertion of
Walking from room to room,
Sweating and panting;
Dying.

No, not
Dying, but wishing
For it’s sweet oblivion from
This hell-like place -
My hell,

Where
Invisible flames
Consume my body, withering
Away my failing will
To survive.

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  • poseidonsea
    May 23, 2007
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    Very nice..nice imagery