I hear my man has been disloyal
They're just rumors, I tell myself
But deep down, I know it's true
Further apart we grow
I need affection
All that is left
For me to
Do is
Creep
Author notes
Inspired by the song Creep by TLC
in the form of a nonet
username is hopelessxromantic
A contest entry
- First round!!! by Love-Lee.
525 points, ended May 26, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well i'm definitely not a fan of the song but i can't say the same for the poem! I love the way you have done it in a nonet it definitely adds to the poem! Good work!
Axe
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Nice work in form and content.
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Good
It was short sweet and to the point i loved it! Keep up the good work!
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