Your smile
Your touch
You fell
All that i long for
And everyday
Is a constant reminder
That you have gone
Fled from the scene of the crime
My heart lay broken and torn
Spatters of blood all around
From your careless hand
Knife lay bloody and red
This massacre of the heart
This pounding on my soul
Like the long awaited
Funeral drum
I lay lifeless in a casket
From your careless hand
Please tell me what you think
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word can't begin to discribe this!!
everyones got their shit, some are just harder than others...you must have really loved this person.... keep your head high... you direrve better anyways... hope everything is ok... Only time will heal
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thats im glad u liked it
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aww hunni i'm so sorry. i hope you're okay. this was written really well, i love the wording and the imagery.
This massacre of the heart
This pounding on my soul
Like the long awaited
Funeral drum
I lay lifeless in a casket
From your careless hand
definitely amazing. great job.
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aww. I felt this way a few weeks ago when me and my ex broke up. Things just seemed so horible. At least you guys werent together for awhile you know? if you guys were to of dated then it would of hurt a lot more when things came to an end like i said before some things just arnt ment to be. but you did a great job thank you for sharing your words with me once again amazing.
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I am made speechless by the pure soul this poem desplays.
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