Its just a pineapple in a really tall tree
And it would stay up there forever
Unless we join all together
Then we’ll be free
theres nothing wrong with caring for another
im sure anyone would say its fine
underneath it all we are just animals
who depend on each-other
we could not survive without love
we could not survive without peace
The obstical is only several feet higher
Ill help be the ladder
Only to find yourself
I only care ta
Make you feel betta
So your world would be much easier
Its just a pineapple in a really tall tree
And it would stay up there forever
Unless we join all together
Then we’ll be free
Please tell me what you think
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ok, so I just realized that I read the whole thing wrong. I thought it had to do with that theory thingy that we're all pinapples. Anyway, it's very peaceful like, the titles really long, maybe you could change that a bit and I think you may have some typos in this stanza, "I only care ta
Make you feel betta
So your world would be much easier" what do you think? anyway, thats all the constructive critisism I have right now, it's pretty good to me!
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