I wish that I could have died in that accident instead of you,
That way Paul & everyone that knew you wouldn't be so blue,
I'm tired of looking at the pain & dealing with this hurt,
I cry on my pillow never sleeping & tears all over my shirt,
I want Paul to be happy but without you he seems in so much pain,
This life is like a storm to me & without you it always rains,
Please help me my angel, I'm doing the best I can possibly be,
Please help me to help Paul & the others & please help me to see,
To find a way to see the bright side of things for I really do try,
But everytime I try every bit of my heart & spirit decays & dies,
I don't care who your Best Friend was for you were mine before...
And always will be forever for when you died my heart hit the floor,
We were suppose to graduate together & celebrate our wonderful youth,
But then it hits me that you won't be there & It hurts to see the truth,
I Miss You Vicki & I will forever remember you wherever I will go,
I promise to share my memories of you & that your spirit will always grow.
I MISS YOU
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This is a poem to Vicki, My Angel that I will never forget. I've been missing her a lot. There hasn't been a day that has gone by that I haven't cried.I know that I need to let go & let her be, But right now that is unbearable for me to consider.
Written August 1st, 2003
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I feel your pain. You can't just let go cold turkey it gradually goes away. Don't worry I'm here for you and if you need to talk don't hesitate. Great job!
~Yahiko~
I luv you!
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a very heartfelt tribute to ur best friend i must say.
i know how is it like losing someone with whom u r attached ..i felt same way when i lost my uncle.. it hurts.. but death is the only thing which has no cure in this world ..the only thing where humans go helpless.. god gives the strenght to bear and time heals..and they keep alive in our memories forever... -
You can never let go of someone you love, just learn to live with it, losing someone you care about isn't like anything else, it hurts much deeper, i really enjoyed your poem, like you told me, things will get better, and i am here for you.
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This is a great poem, one of the most heart felt poems i have ever read, and it nearly brought me to tears. you have written it very well, and obviously with such raw emotion and sincerity.
thank you for your comments on my poem, they were much appreciated. i hope time heals you,
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wonderful tribute to a wonderful friend
This is such a beautiful tribute to Vicki, I just wish that you weren't in such pain. I can see in this poem that she was a very dear friend, and she will always be in your heart. Best of luck in overcoming this heartache, I know that it is hard. It will also take time, so don't punish or push yourself. Mary Anne
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Vicki a loving tribute a person I am sure was a wonderful friend, The grieveing ( sic) process is diferent for everyone. I can not honestly say that I know how you feel but i can understand the ineer anguish and the constant questions of why and why not me. I can offer you a shelter from the storm as well as a author page always open for any comment and rant you may need to share.. I hope you will someday remember that you friend may be gone in a physical sense but is still very much alive in the spiritual realm.
peace be with & blessed be;
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A wonderful tribute. Car accidents these days are way too common, I've lost an uncle to a motorcycle accident, I know how it is. Death also comes to all of us, it's just the way things have to happen, the way things work, the cycle of life if you will. I know I sound like a bhuddist but it's the way I see it, death is not a beginning or an end, just the continuation of existance. Don't forget ber or remember the bad things about it, but remember her for who she was and all the good times you had, but live your life to the fullest and enjoy the rest of it. Onto the poem - the '&' marks gave it a wonderful flow, it all went so well, no pauses to resume the rhythm, it was an enjoyable read since it wasn't jerky and all fitted together so well. There's not much more to say than that, it definately pulls at the heart strings and makes you think. All I can say is what it screamed at me - This is reality!
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This is a wonderful tribute to Vicki and I am sure that her soul appreciates your continuing love and care.I think that she would tell you to remember all the good times you had together and to get on with your life and live it to the fullest.I am sure you will.
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That's so beautiful. My opinion (for whatever it's worth) is that you don't need to let her go, ever. That's because she's not ever going to let you go. You sound like an amazing friend, and she is very lucky to have you. Celebrate the wonderful things you both accomplished, even though it's easier to mourn and be depressed. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, and I hope you start feeling better. Keep writing!
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this poem is very sad. anytime that some one dieds it's hard on everyone. but you shouldn't wish that you would have died, cause then those people would have missed you. i know its very hard and i don't know if it's right to say get over it cause it's not but keep on going and let her memoria live on. just remember the good. i don't know what else i can say this is very sad. i hope i showed you something you wanted to see. if you need anything i'm here.
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this is wonderful,(the poem not the situation) i feel the emotion that you put in here and i understand what you mean how you wish you went and not her and honestly it would be no better, im so sorry this happened, but keep writing wonderful poems like this and it will help -
I can feel your pain radiating through your words. Losing someone is never easy. Especially someone so young and so close to your own heart. I'll keep you in my thoughts. Keep writing, and I hope things get better.
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You have expressed yourself wonderfully in this poem! I too have lost many people....my parents and many other friends...etc. I know what it feels like to lose the physical presence of those around us. But they are always with us in spirit, even though we don't always feel them. Prayers are heard...say your word. Let go and move on....for they are always with us. (((( Hugs ))) ~Bud~
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Its never easy forgetting your best friend, usually they're like your sister or brother, and this poem shows how much you cared for her...But if you would of taken her place, it would be her writting this, not you...Sometimes you just have to accept it and deal with it, no matter how hard it may be.
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This is really good. I've never had a close friend of mine die before so I can't exactly relate, but like you, I also lost my dad. He died when I was about 9 years old. I don't have many memories, and I'm kind of glad because I'm afraid if I did, some of them wouldn't be so good. I lost him to drugs and alcohol. Both of which changed his life and his personality over time. They took away the loving father I should have right now. So I definately understand your hurt. I think you should try to get around it but dont ever forget those special people! You did a great job with this poem! I could feel your pain as I read it and even though I've never lost a close friend I seemed to relate to it somehow. You did an awesome job.
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wow, this is amazing yet depressing, i can read the pain that this put you through, im sorry. this was a wonderful poem with a great outlook. kudos.
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This was really good. Even if it wasn't, it would be straight from the heart and that would make it special and wonderful in its own way. I'm glad you're letting this out through poetry and not letting yourself dwell on it. Just remember the good times you had with Vicki, hold your head up high, and smile. She would want you to be happy. And she'll always be up there in Heaven when you need her. Great poem!
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I'm so sorry that you lost such a wonderful friend. It is very hard to deal with death and especially when it happens so tragically. When I was younger, I lost a good friend to leukemia, one to a car accident, and one to a drive-by shooting. The pain never really goes away, but rest assured that it does get less intense. All you can do is cherish the times you spent with Vicki, and be thankful that you were able to share her life with her while she was here. She was lucky to have someone like you to celebrate her memory. My thoughts are with you Sara.
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This is beautiful. I know its hard to deal with at the moment, but i really hope things get easier for you, you just need to remember all the good times that you had with her and try not to remember the time when she passed away becuase that will only bring sad memories and it will make you feel sad.
I wish you all the best, and hope that you still stay strong.
In future when you post poems - ill try and be here soon so i can read them!! Ive been really bad and been away for a while so I'm gonna try and catch up on your poems now!
much love to you and God bless
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Sara Dawn,
Write a poem so we know who Vicki was that you knew that you miss so much. The good and the funny things that made her such a good friend... Write a poem celebrating the happy times with Megan and especially and also your dad. Negative words are not allowed. These are poems to celebrate their memory and not mourn their loss. You need to answer the phone and the knock at your door from life and bring them back to life by celebrating their happiest moments in memory not solidifying yourself and them in their darkest moment. Four poems of things that make you smile when you think of Megan, Vicki and your dad and if you didn't know Danny that well ask your brother and mother what memories makes them smile. Tell them it is an assignment for a poem. We are going to get those ten 70 pg. notebooks for a dollar today at Target for positive affirmations. What were your dad and Vicki and Megan's favorite color to buy each a notebook to write their favorite things in celebration of their lives so you can better celebrate yours. Only the black use for negative and only get one black. Remember, Dr. Phil said it takes 100 positive affirmations to mend each negative.
Godspeed and best wishes cyber daughter
Love your cyber mom
(((HUGS & SMILES)))
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this is a sad poem but i understand completely i also had a friend that died in a car accident
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no, I'm not crying...I...uhh...have something in my eye.
Anyway, I am very sorry about your loss. I wish sometimes that I had the power to ressurect, but I, sadly, don't.
*hugs*
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Hey It's me Tanica...Damn girl that poem was truely a piece of work at it's best. I'm sorry for you loosing your friend. But i'm sure she'll always be looking over you and Paul&everyone else. Loosing someone close, it happens to often..i wish you the best. Hey I'm brown Tooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!(HEHE)Much loves girl. Ever need someone to talk to IM me or e-mail me..Please feel free. Loved your poem. Keep it coming.
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ive never had some one close to me pass away but if it was my best friend who passed away, i'd be a wrek, trust me i know how you feel. ne ways this was a real good write it had good emotional expression to it and had a strong msg, thanks for sharing, keep it up -
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Aww. My great grandparents just recenetly passed away, but I didn't take it badly. Death is a natural thing, and it doesn't bother me much. But I do hope things get better for you
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That is so sad. Well thank you for sharing your story with us. I can just feel the emotions in this poem. Also thank you for liking my poetry and just being so kind about my work. Again thanks for sharing.
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Losing someone is never easy. My Grandfather just passed away and I know it'll be hard on my dad.
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