See how fast
One heart breaks
See how little time it takes
One false step
One small lie
Fragile love can quickly die
In a flash
It is gone
One more star you wished upon
Fades to dark
Out of sight
One heart breaks alone tonight
Should I search for deeper meaning
in this latest love charade?
Maybe something strong and noble,
from this mess, could still be made
Should I rise above the moment?
Try to see beyond the pain?
So damned hard to find the rainbow
When you're blinded by the rain...
See how little
Time it takes
See how fast this one heart breaks
Fragile love
Can quickly die
From one false step and one small lie
One more star
You wished upon
Gave a flash and then was gone
One heart breaks
Out of sight
In the dark alone tonight
Rakerman
Please tell me what you think
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Hood-wink
"So damned hard to find the rainbow
When you're blinded by the rain..."
^ Clever.
This could be a song.
Let me say, I've never had more fun doing a hood-wink. Your poetry is such a pleasure! I just adore meter and rhyme and your subject matter interests me on top of it.
You are talented and I'm glad to have found your writing.
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Should I search for deeper meaning
in this latest love charade?
So damned hard to find the rainbow
When you're blinded by the rain...
okok .. I HAD to read another poem
lol .. this is wonderful
You really really should print a book
I think i've told you that before
but you should
As for the poem .. it is brilliant
I wish I had the words to maake you feel better
but maybe if I had the words, I wouldn't be feeling so myself..
But just take care of yourself
They say it, and I hope it's true
"But everything will be alright"
Much Luv,
(Your hungry girl waiting for the frycook to stop being a poet) [lol]
NeveR ♥
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Thats one powerful poem. I just love the entire poem, the way its worde how its flowed, the meaning behind the words, just lovely.
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'One Heart Breaks'.....
But sometime what we think is a heartbreak is in fact not....
for nothing is as we think at all....
the eye is only a small sight...the heart is a small sight as well....and the thoughts is not far off as well....
anyways your words are that of jewels all aglow...
thank you for sharing them with us and me again...
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This is a nice write. Goodluck
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So damned hard to find the rainbow
When you're blinded by the rain...
They are quite possibly the most inspired lines I have ever read...wow...I would love to have you in my family, or have a link to your page from mine so even more people can share in your wonderful gift. You know I'm going to say it is excellent, because it is. Keep writing and take care
x
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F***. I can't tell you how much I love this. It's beautiful. I love each piece of yours that I read more than the last, but I don't love the ones I read before any less than the new... it's not really supposed to make sense. I just love your writing.
Thanks for sharing. Take care.
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Excellent play with words, and I loved the thought placed right in the middle to break it up. A unique way of writing here.
How fragile love can be, and it is so true that one lie can make it collaspe.
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