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False Promises!

You promised that you would never talk to her. You promised that you would never lie.
You said you would not give False Promises.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    Nicely done, saweet strawberry. Something so much of life. Lies and false promises come to easy for so many.
    Well said.

    Love


  • zain
    June 17, 2007
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    err.. what's the point of this poem? where's the rest of it?


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 23, 2007

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    I love this. It's awesome. But one thing.. it's three lines. Sorry I can't take it Good luck in the contest

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33