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Taken My Life..

Sadness Has Taken My Life To Those Doors Through Which I Won't Be Able To Pass Ever!

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    Very deep words you have penned...so sadly true that pain and sadness do this to us...lovely work...
    Love,
    mom


  • Violinstrings silver member
    June 1, 2007
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    very good

    when you are sad , you do feel that way


  • Violinstrings silver member
    June 1, 2007
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    true

    good job!!


  • Violinstrings silver member
    June 1, 2007
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    very true


  • The Poetic Angel
    May 24, 2007
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    very good line ... good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 23, 2007
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    I like this Great line... Good luck in the contest

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33

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