She sits alone in her room
her music blasts through the speakers
drowning out her screams and cries
her room is as black as night
She looks into the mirror
at her tear stained face
and blood shot eyes
she just stares
She wants to shatter it
smash it to pieces
she hates the person
the person staring back at her
She comes home from school
Hoping to die
She turns to self mutilation
Its her only release
She hates the scars
That are all over her body
But loves the high
From the blood pouring out
She has a black heart down
And a dead soul
She is living as lie at school
Everyone thinks she’s fine
She hides the truth from
everyone she loves and cares about
Not wanting them to know
What she goes through every night
One night, it all ends for her
Too much blood poured out
Her family stares down
At her blood stained body
So place the black roses on her coffin
And think of the times when
She smiled and laughed, when
You thought she was happy
Author notes
I dunno if this goes with the title. Tell me if it doesn't and I'll remove it from the contest. Or you can.
A contest entry
- Titles by jaded mine.
380 points, ended July 13, 2007, 23 entries
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For a dark write~ You really blown it out of the water and beyond! I don't usually like dark~ but the way you wrote this.... WOW! it is truly a great write! Good luck in the contest!
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Completely Amazing! I Love This So Much And I Dont Know If You Are The She But I'm Going Through The EXACT Same Thing That She Is. You Captured A Very Great Thing Here. Anyway, Great Job!
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I really like it. Amazing, touching.
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OMG Sis this poem is like so like professonil! Ya that was a comtlament. Sis thankz for the comment on my poem too. I guess I just wanted to get my anger out yesterday or when ever I wrote that poem! Well back to ur poem like is this based on someone I figured not but still i'm curious my poems always r so just askin' I like this poem it's not really for my age reading but atleast I know what it all means other peeps like my friends when they'd read this they'd be like what is this supposed to me and think it's stupid, but I think it's great
Love alwayz,
♥~Freddy~&heart -
It's really sad, but in the end I liked it. keep up the good work
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