The wind blows
cool on the face
of heat flashes
dancing head to toe
-day
to
night-
Deep breaths
kiss away nerves
morning after morning
flush after flush
-it shall
end
soon-
Heart beats steady
strong as a bass drum
rivers of water flow
dam breaks and
-my heart
speeds
up-
Legs wet, ready to go,
my breaths kiss
the labor approaching
as bellow me lays
-a puddle
of my
labored
memories-
I am ready
to
go!
Author notes
For Paper Pirates. My assignment was to write from the point of view of having my water break... obviously that's never happened to me... but I tried. Hope it's okay!
Please tell me what you think
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Meg,
You did a great job penning this piece. You have quite the imagination to pen a poem from the point of view of a situation you have never experienced. Kudos to you young lady!
Love
Auntie Bel
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I can imagine how hard it must have been for you (as for the rest of the paper pirates) to try and live into such a situation that you've never dealt with before
I honestly think you did quite a good job with this though
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Well done on this piece sweety. A very different subject to write on thats for sure. You have a spelling mistake too
Legs wet, ready to go,
my breaths kiss
the labor approaching
as bellow me lays
-a puddle
of my
labored
memories-It should be below. Good luck in your group contest.
Keep writing and I will keep reading. ;)
Love Mum
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Lmao
Now this is a very unexpected poem and the title really threw me off but Brilliant poem here Sweets! Someday when you are ready you will have your own kids and you'll have a blast in the future. any ways this is such an aweosme poem considering you have not experienced that yet., any waysvery well penned and LOL I could imagine all of this taking place the birth that is not you =)~ any ways good work and hope your friend enjoyed the poem
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hmm an interesting poem and though I have absolutely no idea how that would feel you seem to have captured it well.
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