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What I really only wanted

I really only wanted you
to smile
I really only wanted you
to laugh
I really only wanted you
to grab my hand as you walked past
I really only wanted
to hear your voice
I really only wanted
to feel your embrace
I really only wanted
to kiss your lips
I really only wanted
to be the one you miss
I really only wanted
to hear those words
I really only wanted you.

Author notes

This is the first poem that I have written in MONTHS! I stopped writing because i don't know i just did.
this is about a boy that i really fell for.

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  • Breeder
    May 23, 2007

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    is the poem about how the guy didn't return the feelings for you? because thats the impression i got from it.