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Red checked table cloths



        he watched
        across red checked
        table cloths

        her coffee had stopped
        steaming now,
        cappuccino bubbles
        resting proud above the
        wide white cup

        idly, she dipped into
        chocolate speckled
        foamy froth,
        and withdrew a
        dripping creamy splendour;
        melting moment

        she eye’d her
        marbled milk covered finger,
        then dragged it
        across pink lips,
        before taking it
        deep inside
        her moist mouth,
        she drew her head back
        slightly, and gently
        sucked the tip

        she caught sight
        of an open mouthed man
        across cup strewn tables;
        her eyes widened
        and she stared directly
        at him

        he blinked and blushed,
        as his cup clattered
        and splattered
        cold coffee
        into his saucer,
        and she just flashed her eyes
        and curled a tilted smile.

 

 

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  • Liquid memories
    June 3, 2007

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    Well I say!

    I thought pwerhaps it was an Italian restaurant, coffee shop i suppoe. what an emcounter? delightful flow to it and interesting.I do not like coffee or the other. I prefer tea.


  • Floorboards
    May 24, 2007

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    hell's teeth, the imagery in this is absolutely incredible jan, the whole scene played out like a film in my head. Great write, well done indeed, granny!
    Alex


  • individuality gold member
    May 23, 2007

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    damn i nearly choked on my malteaser - do it again - do it again lol - garcon - bill please, i need to go to the laundry


  • capricornpoet
    May 23, 2007

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    lovely whimsy

    I enjoyed the whimsy satire and the flow of imagery
    of seduction, it was capticating and sensual ..now what cafe did you say you go to lol ....chocolat lady ...ooopps i dropped my coffee