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Lust Stained Sheets

You and him
have your fun during the last night.
Noone knows of those secrets
that you both hold tight.

Those sheets know the truth
of the feelings that you hold.
Your lust stained sheets
are just waiting to unfold.

Those sheets hold the secrets
of your late night affair,
they feel the passion of lust
that fills the air.

You're hiding your feelings
in these lust stained sheets,
they hide so well
that you can barely sleep.

Your lust and passion
from your late night fun,
is hidden deep below
where the lust stained sheets have begun.

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  • Candy-Coated-Love
    May 31, 2007

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    this is really good...ive been there and am still there...its really powerful...and it hits my situation really good...


  • Entiese
    May 24, 2007

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    i liked this poem it was very intrigueing, I loved the flow of word, the part where you said:

    You're hiding your feelings
    in these lust stained sheets,
    they hide so well
    that you can barely sleep.

    Once I started reading it I couldn't stop....VERY GOOD